Hi guys, Today we were talking about slogan and we had to chose one of this two pictures. This is what I will put on the slogan. Safe the birds and be a kiwi hero. What will you guys put on the slogan.
My name is Willy and I'm one of the commenters for the Summer Learning Journey programme. To remind you, the two images showcased were only examples of slogans. Otherwise, you've done a nice slogan - it could be shortened to two separate slogans just to keep with the shortness of slogans - just a suggestion :)
I hope you can go back to this activity and find a campaign that can suit your slogan. Or slogans. I think a bird or kiwi related campaign would suit the slogan best :D
Hello Pao, I am Vitaraag as you probably already know. I think your slogan sound absolutely amazing. I would say something like that but I am not sure yet. Maybe next time you can add a picture f your slogan and add more writing about it. keep up the amazing work!
Greetings, Pao,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Willy and I'm one of the commenters for the Summer Learning Journey programme. To remind you, the two images showcased were only examples of slogans. Otherwise, you've done a nice slogan - it could be shortened to two separate slogans just to keep with the shortness of slogans - just a suggestion :)
I hope you can go back to this activity and find a campaign that can suit your slogan. Or slogans. I think a bird or kiwi related campaign would suit the slogan best :D
Keep up the good work! :D
-Willy
Hello Pao,
ReplyDeleteI am Vitaraag as you probably already know. I think your slogan sound absolutely amazing. I would say something like that but I am not sure yet. Maybe next time you can add a picture f your slogan and add more writing about it. keep up the amazing work!
Vitaraag