Hello turtles🐢🌊, today I am going to share with you my creative writing. So, if you don't know what is a creative writing. A creative writing is basicly writing whatever you want. If yu want to write about turtles you can. Or if you want to write about Christmas, you can! Its about using your imagination. It was a about Covid-19. I also worte another one that was about an invisible creature. But it isn't finish yet. Here is the link to my creative writing.
I just want to share a little news. I have 2 new turtles. They are both Mochima and Marina❤. They are both so beautiful. Now here is the link to my creative writing.
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Hi Pao,
ReplyDeleteThis is Jaimie from your class.
I really liked this blog post and your story. I liked the structure of the story and I also like the idea of it. Maybe next time, you could proof read it because I noticed some parts in the story where you could of added a comma or a full stop.
Other than that, I thought your story and blog post was really cool!.
Be sure to visit my blog and read my Creative Writing at wpsjaimieh.blogspot.com
Blog you later!
Hi Pao. I loved reading your story, your a great writer☆! I also loved the images you added and the chapters♡ Maybe next time you could add a photo of your picture! Which turtle is older?
ReplyDeleteKia ora. I am Morgan from St Mary’s School.
ReplyDeleteI really liked how you added emojis .
I learnt that you have two new turtles.
Maybe you could add a picture of your turtles.
Mā te wā
Morgan